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Jump up dnb
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- June 16, 2007Any feedback welcome good or bad... Thanks.
- June 22, 2007Dude, the idea is good but it's just 6 minutes the same thing! The drums changes nowhere in the song man. I like the jungle bass you used but it is also just a loop thru the whole song. You should really put some other things in it than just drum-strings-bass, because now it's just the whole time waiting for something to happen. But nothing happens. Try to work on that and it could become something better, because the sound is OK.
- June 22, 2007You have some good ideas there that need to be built on. All the basic elements you used (drums, bass, melody) are very nice, but they are repeated for the entire duration of the peice. Keep in mind that something new needs to happen every four bars. Whether this is adding something new, breaking the music down, changing the key, or anything else that will keep the listener interested. Hope this helps you out with your next peice... looking forward to hearing it.
- June 30, 2007Great thanks for the feedback! I kind of figured I needed to change things around a bit more.......cheers
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